tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6970502759702586204.post8781656596820229639..comments2024-03-25T03:59:31.089+00:00Comments on Behind The Barred Window: A Glance at the Past: A Glimpse of the Future? Toyntanenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01964511433148028640noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6970502759702586204.post-6771520645925739482012-10-23T21:21:57.823+01:002012-10-23T21:21:57.823+01:00I love your erotic ideas as always Garth! I'm ...I love your erotic ideas as always Garth! I'm now off to look for a woman wanting a lifestyle relationship or open a fantasy strictly disciplined prison hotel for women.You tink anybody would be interested!..)WIP Fannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6970502759702586204.post-57480520879820013422012-10-23T03:06:50.527+01:002012-10-23T03:06:50.527+01:00Let me second what Orage said,
It IS a great pity...Let me second what Orage said,<br /><br />It IS a great pity you won't enlarge on Penny. You have dropped so many hints over the years, and a real-life story is even more delicious than the vast majority of fictional stories - if only because it actually happened.snoozznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6970502759702586204.post-28324203559844730962012-10-23T01:39:27.892+01:002012-10-23T01:39:27.892+01:00I feel not unlike a fool. I apologize.
The Non Vi...I feel not unlike a fool. I apologize.<br /><br />The Non Victorian ChickAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6970502759702586204.post-83335149946796663362012-10-22T17:51:48.855+01:002012-10-22T17:51:48.855+01:00@Non Victorian Chick
Ahem, I'm a woman!@Non Victorian Chick<br />Ahem, I'm a woman!Oragenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6970502759702586204.post-83725350406649650582012-10-20T22:27:37.832+01:002012-10-20T22:27:37.832+01:00I've always appreciated the care you take abou...I've always appreciated the care you take about plausibility, or at least suspension of disbelief. It sets you apart. Maybe "suspension of disbelief" is more the thing than "plausibility" in spanking stories. Don't use things or situations that scream NO WAY. I could suspend disbelief in the Insitution because it was so vividly imagined, and internally, it all seemed to work. Maybe in real life it would be awfully hard for this place to exist, but there was nothing there that really smacked of a hollowed out volcano. <br /><br />Maybe that's the thing that really destroys suspension of disbleief. It's when the writers clearly aen't even trying. Dr No had an island. An island you can sort of accept. The hollowed out volcano? No way. which is why I think this ending you're writing wil actually be pretty good. because you're clearly trying. You aren't like the Bond franchise writers after they decided that since they had a successful franchise, plausibility didn't matter anymore, since the audience would turn up and pay regardless of what they put on the screen.<br /><br />Yes, actually, I can see live in situations making a comeback, since the economy is in fact pancaked, and no one seems to know what to do about it. Sadly, that is plausible. Maybe you can use that idea in a future book. <br /><br />I would think tht there would be pictures of 60's street scenes to help your descriptions and recreations. Actually, the 60s and 70s are a weird time, at least to me. I can look at people wearing clothes of the period, and I think...Yuck. I don;t get that with clothes of the 20s, 30s, 40s, even the 50s. I don't get that with clothes of the mid to late 80s on. But the 60s and 70s were, as far as I can see, a time when people made utteer folls of themselves, with clothes, and a lot else besides. <br /><br />I'm glad to hear that Orage is helping out with the proofreading, because I know he'll do a good job. <br /><br />The Non Victorian Chick<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6970502759702586204.post-83051840730250372662012-10-18T17:40:47.062+01:002012-10-18T17:40:47.062+01:00Thank you, kind sir, it was a pleasure!
Allow me ...Thank you, kind sir, it was a pleasure!<br /><br />Allow me to disagree when you say:<br />"it is all too easy for the reader to form that impression in the last few pages, and the risk then is that the illusion is shattered."<br />Since we are in the 1960s, remember the last Magdalen laundry closed in 1996. Wasn't there a widespread conspiracy between families and the Church then? And nothing to write home about at the time.<br /><br />More to the point: your "lifestyle relationship" with Penny might very well have evolved into the sort of life Alison is subject to, should you have been thus inclined.<br /><br />Pity you won't enlarge on the golden years with Penny! Reading fantasy stories with fictional characters is all very well, but an account of a real-life story...Wow! I've been licking my chops! <br />Oragenoreply@blogger.com